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Jamie ref sheet

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Finally I get to upload Jamie! Can't wait to start puttin him into situations and stuff =)
All his info is in on the sheet, so nothing much to write here. All I can say is I LOVE MY JAMIE! :heart:

Art & Character (c) to :iconapples-ishness: Please don't use in any way (especially do not rp this character) without written permission from me.
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This is for comment contest

I really love to read character sheets so I though it would be interesting to comment on this.

So I will start with the drawing part. The main drawing look very nice and colorful. The shading on his jeans is wonderful and the shirt also look more detailed. But sadly, I think that the anatomy is a bit worse than on most of your pictures. It also seems that you slightly changed your style. It´s a good thing that you try to experiment with your drawings. But in my personal opinion I liked the previous style more (it was a lot cuter!) But that just my subjetcitve opinion, you don´t have to take it serious.

I also like that you added small sketches of his experssion on the side. It is really good practice and it helps you and your viewers to get know your character better.

Now the character development part. I think this looks really like an interesting character. Maybe a little bit to normal, but since I don´t know his story I can´t say much more. I love that you don´t use classic superhero cliché or that you didn´t put him so some preexisting story or anime, but you try to invent your own character and story. It is wonderful thing, I thing that more people should try it!

So far he doesn´t seem like unoriginal Gary Stu. Just one thing I think you should pay big attention to tragic events in his past. Never forget that these thing have a very big impact on his personality and future live. Now, I´m not saying it is bad thing, actually it can be excelent when done right, but you will have probably work more on him or maybe even read some material how these people react in real life.

In general, I really love this character sheet. There is a lot of interesting details about your character but not too much (which also isn´t good because really no one is interested in blood type or star sign of your charie if it doesn´t have any impact on story). I would like to see more pepole doing sheets like this. Good work!

Well, I look forward to hear more about your story. Good luck :)